This assignment was a particular challenge for me. I was unsure of what to write about for my narrative, and then after just a free write exercise in class, I realized that I had some overwhelming feelings about the divorce of my mother and my stepdad. After writing my narrative, I was unsure of how I should transform the written work into a film piece. Dave Underwood’s visit to class was extremely helpful, since I had to read my narrative in class. He suggested that I use voicemails or an interview as a source of my voiceover elements. After that suggestion the ideas started to flow and I was able to feel better about this assignment.
The title I used for my narrative was “So Long, George”. I did this because the narrative was more informative and provided more background about the divorce. I used the phrase “so long” because it’s a more nonchalant way of saying goodbye. He was not my father, and although he had been in my life for a very long time, his departure was not as significant as I thought it would have been. I was very affected emotionally, but my everyday life didn’t change very much. Other people also didn’t seem to notice, so it was like it wasn’t a very big deal, even though deep down it was to me. I titled my film piece “George”. I did this because the whole work is very simple and it is a voicemail recording from him playing along with some scenes of me. There is not any background information provided in the film, or at least not to the extent of my narrative. I wanted the title to seem more like it was just a character bio or a chapter from my life, since in a way he is. I also didn’t want to give away too much or try to inform the viewer too much by making a longer or more complicated title. I chose a very simple font, because the whole feeling of the film is simple. I also didn’t know a lot about using title pages in iMovie, but even if I had spent more time playing with it I would have kept the same simple font or one very similar to it.
My idea for the film piece was to show the detachment that my stepfather has from my life now. I think detachment and loneliness and isolation from someone is a very relatable topic. I think that by showing myself along in every scene of the film, viewers can tell that the person who is speaking in the voicemails is no longer in my everyday life, and I do not hear from him very often anymore. I had struggled with the best way to translate my idea into film, and I changed from my original idea which would have been images of a man with his face out of the frame, doing various activities with my own voice providing voiceover. In the end, I think my original idea would have been too complicated and not as successful as my end result.
The visual scenes were very simple. Over the course of one day I shot myself doing various activities. At the beginning of the film, I am driving, and I provide two different angles, one focused on me and another over the shoulder shot showing what I would see while driving. The next scene shows me walking from my car to unlock my house. Following that scene, I have a few different scenes of me sitting at my table doing homework and then sitting on the couch reading for class. Throughout the whole film, I have a series of voicemails edited together playing. I wanted to do this and only have his voice playing because it shows the more one sided and detached relationship we have now. The quality of the recording was very nice because you can tell that it is a voicemail, and it has the harshness of a voicemail, which is something I wanted to translate in the final product. I had a few issues with the volume of the audio changing in the final uploaded piece, and if I could make any changes to the piece I would try to make the audio flow more smoothly. I think though there are parts where the audio is soft, and the viewers have to focus more on what he is saying and pay more attention. Also the louder parts I liked because George is very loud when he talks, especially when he is on the phone. I always thought he sounded ridiculous and it made me embarrassed for him, since when I talk on the phone I don’t like people overhearing me. He also has a thick Chalmette accent and the people in Chalmette are also very loud when they talk, so I think it is helping to solidify his character. I could not have had anyone else record this with a script or something, it had to be him. I was nervous to ask him, since we do not talk very much anymore but I was very glad when he finally agreed to help me. I didn’t really give him any instructions about what to say except that it was for a project and I needed a few to choose from. A few that he left me were a little bit too sappy and I was worried that the personal level that they would be too personal for an audience to connect to, so I used some parts of them and edited them down. Regarding the scenes used, I also wanted viewers to feel like they were experiencing the day with me, and the length of time could have been seen easily. I wanted them to see that I go about normal days without a connection to George. I also thought that the length of the audio emphasized that when we do talk, we have a lot to fill each other in on because it is so rare that we catch up. I think the transitions between each scene were very good. I think that they flowed well and worked well together. I did not want to pretend that all the scenes followed each other in real time, since I had shot it all over the course of several hours. I wanted viewers to clearly see the change in time. I also wanted viewers to imagine that these would actually be places I would listen to a voicemail: while driving, walking into my house, or even sitting in my house while doing homework.
The final film I created was 4 minutes and 28 seconds long. I had the audio cut off right before it transitions to a black screen before going to the credits. I did this to make a emphasis on the fact that most of the communication I have now with my stepfather is through voicemails. Having the black screen provides a moment of reflection after watching the video, just like you would have reflection after listening to a voicemail. I think the video could have been shorter, but because there was so much audio I wanted to include, having it actually be any shorter would not have been as effective in getting my point across to viewers. I think because there was some variety in the scenes and since they changed, I think boredom was avoided. If I had spent too much longer on each scene or only had one long scene, then I think it would have been boring to viewers.
My film was well received by the class. I think they really understood what I was trying to communicate and what I was going for. This made me feel very good about it, because I was worried that the detachment between the audio and the visuals would have been too disconnected for viewers to get. I was also worried that the piece would be too personal, like the viewers would not be able to relate to it, but I think they did, and it really helped having people read my narrative before we made the films. The only real issue I had with the end product was the audio glitches, which I think I could work out with more experience using iMovie or with some help from someone with more knowledge. I was disappointed in myself for not getting the video done in time for the original due date with the rest of the class, but the extension really helped me get everything done.